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CHAPTER 1  Camelot
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CHAPTER 1
 Camelot

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Camelot emendation—Camelot,”alteration in the MS said I to myself. “I don’t seem to remember hearingalteration in the MS of it beforealteration in the MS. Name of the asylum, likely.”

It was a soft, reposeful, summer landscape, as lovely as a dream, and as lonesome as Sundayalteration in the MS. The air was full of the smell of flowers, and the buzzing of insects, and the twittering of birds; and there were no people, no wagons, there wasalteration in the MS no stir orrejected substantive textual note life, nothing going on. The road was mainly a winding path with hoof-printsemendation in it, and now and then a faint trace of wheels on either side in the grass—wheels that apparently had a tire as broad as one’s hand.textual note

Presently a fair slip of a girl, about ten years old, with a cataract of golden hair streaming down over her shoulders, came along. Around her head she wore a hoop of flame-red poppiesemendation textual note.alteration in the MS It was as sweet an outfit as ever I saw, what there was of itemendation. Shealteration in the MS walked indolently along, with a mind at rest, its peace reflected in her innocentalteration in the MS facealteration in the MS. The circus man paid no attention to her; didn’t even seem to see her. And she—she was no more startled at his fantastic make-up than if she was used to his like every day of her life. She was going by as indifferently as she might have gone by a couple of cows; but when she [begin page 57] happened to notice me, then emendation there was a change! Up wentalteration in the MS her hands, and she was turned to stone; her mouth dropped open, her eyes stared wide and timorouslytextual note, she was the picture of astonished curiosity touched with fear. And there she stood gazing, in a sort of stupefied fascination, till we turned a corner of the wood and were lost to her view. That she shouldalteration in the MS be startled at me instead of at thealteration in the MS other man, was too many for me; I couldn’t make head or tail of it. And that she should seem to consider me a spectacle, and totally overlook her own merits in that respect, was another puzzling thing, and a display of magnanimity, too, that was surprising in one so young. There was food for thought here. I moved along as one in a dream.

As we approached the town, signs of life began to appear. At intervals we passed a wretched cabin, with a thatched roof, and about italteration in the MS small fields and garden patches in an indifferent state of cultivation. There were people, too; brawny men, with long, coarse, uncombed hair that hung down over their faces and made them look like animals. They and the women, as a rule, wore a coarse tow-linen robe that came well below the knee, and a rude sort of sandals; and many wore an iron collar. The smallalteration in the MS boys and girls were always naked; but nobody seemed to know it. All of these people stared at me, talked about me, ran into the huts and fetched out their families to gape at me; but nobody ever noticed that other fellow, except to make him humble salutation and get no response for their pains.

In the town were some substantial windowless houses of stone, scattered among a wilderness of thatched cabins; the streets were mere crookedalteration in the MS alleys, and unpaved; troops of dogs and nude children played in the sun and made life and noise; hogs roamed and rooted contentedly about, and one of thememendation lay in a reeking wallow in the middle of the main thoroughfare and suckled her family. Presently there was a distant blare of military music; it came nearer, still neareremendation, and soon a noble cavalcade wound into view, glorious with plumed helmets, andalteration in the MS flashing mail, and flaunting bannersalteration in the MS and rich doublets and horse-cloths, and gilded spear-heads; and through the muck, and swine, and naked brats, and joyous dogs, and shabbyalteration in the MS huts it took its gallant way, and in its wake we followed. Followed, through one winding alley and then another,—and climbing, always climbing —till at last we gained the breezy height where the huge castle stood. There was an exchange of bugle blasts; thenalteration in the MS a parley from the walls, [begin page 58] where men-at-arms, in hauberk and morion marched back and forth with halberd at shoulder under flapping banners with the rude figure of a dragon displayed upon them; and then the great gates were flung open, the drawbridgeemendation wasemendation lowered, and the head of the cavalcade sweptalteration in the MS forward under the frowningalteration in the MS arches; and we following, soon found ourselves in a great paved court, with towers and turrets stretching up into the blue airemendation on all the four sides; and all about us the dismount was going on, and much greeting and ceremony, and runningalteration in the MS to and fro, and a gay display of moving and intermingling colors, and an altogether pleasant stir and noise and confusion.

“the head of the cavalcade swept forward.”
Editorial Emendations CHAPTER 1  Camelot
  Camelot  (A)  ●  “Camelot  (MS) 
  hoof-prints (I-C)  ●  hoof-  |  prints (MS) 
  poppies. (A)  ●  poppies—other clothing had she none! (MS) 
  It . . . it. (A)  ●  not in  (MS) 
  then  (A)  ●  then (MS) 
  of them (A)  ●  sow (MS) 
  still nearer, (A)  ●  not in  (MS) 
  drawbridge (A)  ●  draw-  |  bridge (MS) 
  was (A)  ●  not in  (MS) 
  air (A)  ●  air, yonder above our heads (MS) 
Rejected Substantives CHAPTER 1  Camelot
  or (MS)  ●  of (Pr,A,E) 
Alterations in the Manuscript CHAPTER 1  Camelot
 “Camelot—Camelot,”] interlined above canceled ‘ “Astolat—Astolat,” ’.
 hearing] follows canceled ‘the’.
 before] followed by ‘—at least out of king Arthur’s rubbish.’ interlined then canceled in pencil.
 Sunday] originally ‘sunday’; ‘S’ written over ‘s’.
 there was] interlined.
 with . . . poppies.] the MS reads ‘with . . . poppies—other clothing had she none!’; ‘with . . . none!’ added on the verso of the MS page with instructions to turn over to replace canceled ‘came along—stark naked! Her long hair was down her back, her hands were clasped over her head, and’; emended.
 She] originally ‘she’; ‘S’ written over ‘s’.
 innocent] interlined above canceled ‘gentle’.
 face] written over wiped-out ‘f’.
 Up went] interlined above canceled ‘Down came’.
 should] written over ‘wa’ or ‘was’.
 at the] ‘at’ interlined.
 it] written over ‘s’.
 small] interlined; followed by an unrecovered word or note added and canceled in pencil.
 crooked] interlined.
 plumed helmets, and] interlined.
 and flaunting banners] interlined in pencil.
 shabby] interlined above canceled ‘tattered’.
 an . . . then] interlined.
 swept] interlined above canceled ‘moved’.
 frowning] interlined above what appears to be canceled ‘massy’ which replaced ‘massive’; ‘y’ written over canceled ‘ive’.
 running] written over wiped-out ‘pl’.
Textual Notes CHAPTER 1  Camelot
 or] As in the manuscript. The first American edition’s “of” is a likely transcription error, especially for a typist, and in any case is relatively indifferent.
 hand.] Followed in the manuscript by “SK” printed in the right margin two lines high, to which a small script “ip” has been added. The entire notation is in pencil and is circled and canceled.
 poppies.] Under the last line on the page (which in the manuscript reads “poppies—other clothing had she none!”) Mark Twain wrote and canceled in pencil the note “catch cold.”
 timorously] In the manuscript two faint diagonal lines are penciled over “ly.” It is not clear whether Mark Twain wanted to cancel the adverbial ending, was merely considering canceling it, or was making a mark associated with an oral reading. Because of this uncertainty, the original reading has been retained.