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Source: Vassar College, Poughkeepsie, N.Y ([NPV])

Cue: "Some of the"

Source format: "MS"

Letter type: "[standard letter]"

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Revision History: Larson, Brian

Published on MTPO: 2025

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To Charles L. Webster
24 May 1884 • Hartford, Conn. (MS, in pencil: NPV, UCCL 02984)
Dear Charley—

Some of the pictures are good, but none of them are very very good. The faces are generally ugly, & wrenched into inhuman distortions, over-expression amounting sometimes to distortion. As a rule (though not always) the people in these pictures are forbidding & repulsive. Reduction will modify them, no doubt, but it can hardly make them pleasant folk to look at.emendation An artist shouldn’t follow a book too literally, perhaps—if this is the necessary result. And mind you, much of the drawing in these pictures is careless & bad.

The pictures will do—they will just barely do—& that is the best I can say for them. Suppose you submit them to t

The frontispiece has the usual blemish—an ugly, ill-drawn face. Huck Finn is an exceedingly good-hearted boy, & should carry a good & good-looking face.

Don’t dishearten the artist—show him where he has improved, rather than where he has failed, & punch him up to improve more.

Suppose you have one of the pictures reduced & printed—then we can get a satisfyingemendation idea of the thing.

Please send a cloth Prince & Pauper to Mrs. H. G. Brooks, care of Remsen Brooks, 80 Broadway.

Yrs
S L C
Textual Commentary
Source text(s):

MS, in pencil, Jean Webster McKinney Family Papers, Special Collections, NPV.

Previous Publication:

MTBus, 255–56.

Provenance:

see McKinney Family Papers in Description of Provenanceclick to open link.

Emendations and Textual Notes
 at. ● at. || at.
 satisfying ● ‘fy’ over miswritten ‘fy’
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