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Source: University of Illinois, Rare Book Room, Urbana, Ill ([IU-R])

Cue: "Mr Bret Harte has been reading to me his charming"

Source format: "MS"

Letter type: "[standard letter]"

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To George Bentley
per Fanny C. Hesse
5 December 1876 • Hartford, Conn. (MS: IU-R, UCCL 12341)

Mr Bret Harte has been reading to me his charming little love story. As I consider it the best piece of literary work he has ever done, I wanted it to go to Temple Bar. I said if it got there in time and was otherwise useable in the magazine, you would pay him whatever was fair for such use of it. It is being printed in a weekly paper in New-York city—in four installments—the last to appear Christmas Eve, and the matter to issue as a book the middle of Jany or first of February. I send you corrected proofs.2explanatory note

Very truly yours
Sam L. Clemens
pr F. C. H
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Source text(s):

MS, Papers of Richard Bentley and Son, IU-R.

Previous Publication:

MicroPUL, reel 1.

Provenance:

Purchased between 1951 and 1961.

More information on provenance may be found in Description of Provenanceclick to open link.

Explanatory Notes
1 

Although this letter certainly was read by George Bentley, editor of Temple Bar magazine, Clemens might have mistakenly directed it to his son, Richard, also a member of the family publishing house, as he had done with his letters of 26 Aprilclick to open link and 6 Julyclick to open link.

2 

The story was “Thankful Blossom: A Romance of the Jerseys, 1779.” It appeared in the New York Sun on four consecutive Sundays, beginning 3 December (Harte 1876b). Harte still had a good part of it to write, as Clemens recalled in 1907:

He came to us once, just upon the verge of Christmas, to stay a day and finish a short story for the New York Sun called “Faithful Blossom”—if my memory serves me. He was to have a hundred and fifty dollars for the story, in any case, but Mr. Dana had said he should have two hundred and fifty if he finished it in time for Christmas use. Harte had reached the middle of his story, but his time-limit was now so brief that he could afford no interruptions, wherefore he had come to us to get away from the persistent visits of his creditors. He arrived about dinner time. He said his time was so short that he must get to work straightway after dinner; then he went on chatting in serenity and comfort all through dinner, and afterward by the fire in the library until ten o’clock; then Mrs. Clemens went to bed, and my hot whisky punch was brought; also a duplicate of it for Harte. The chatting continued. I generally consume only one hot whisky, and allow myself until eleven o’clock for this function; but Harte kept on pouring and pouring, and consuming and consuming, until one o’clock; then I excused myself and said good night. He asked if he could have a bottle of whisky in his room. We rang up George, and he furnished it. It seemed to me that he had already swallowed whisky enough to incapacitate him for work, but it was not so; moreover, there were no signs upon him that his whisky had had a dulling effect upon his brain. He went to his room and worked the rest of the night, with his bottle of whisky and a big wood fire for comfort. At five or six in the morning he rang for George; his bottle was empty, and he ordered another; between then and nine he drank the whole of the added quart, and then came to breakfast not drunk, not even tipsy, but quite himself, and alert and animated. His story was finished; finished within the time-limit, and the extra hundred dollars was secured. I wondered what a story would be like that had been completed in circumstances like these; an hour later I was to find out.

At ten o’clock the young girls’ club—by name the Saturday Morning Club—arrived in our library. I was booked to talk to the lassies, but I asked Harte to take my place and read his story. He began it, but it was soon plain that he was like most other people—he didn’t know how to read; therefore I took it from him and read it myself. The last half of that story was written under the unpromising conditions which I have described; it is a story which I have never seen mentioned in print, and I think it is quite unknown, but it is my conviction that it belongs at the very top of Harte’s literature. (AutoMT2, 419)

Temple Bar did not publish “Thankful Blossom” (12 Feb 1877 to Bentley). James R. Osgood and Company, of Boston, published it as a book in January 1877 (Harte 1877a; Scharnhorst 1995, 145, 199; Temple Bar 1894). Charles A. Dana was the owner and editor of the New York Sun; George Griffin was Clemens’s butler. For the Saturday Morning Club see 17 Jan 1877 to Boyesen, n. 3; Harte evidently read his story to the members on 9 December.

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